Lovely.......so romantic....5/5
all the best to them......

Bharti

Wow, this is really romantic and i just loved it.

great poem indeed and great dedication to those lovers

all the best and take care

Aww How cute ^_^, I love cute little loveable moments like these lol!

Poem: Diction seems a little limited, however it worked. It painted a nice picture but left little to the imagination, I personally enjoy flowery words and poetry you can connect to due to the vague but well draw imagery, However I found this poem alluring and couldn't stop reading, which is key in a good poem =) You have great talent, never give it up =)

Also, Welcome to Fishbowl, I'm very happy to have you aborad =) if you need anything let me know, I'm sorry I was not first to send you a comment =) Thankyou for reading the welcome message, any sugesstions I'mm be more then happy to see if they can be done =)

Jenn

Aww i love it! beautiful love story :P
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