End It Now

by Torn   Mar 15, 2006


I hide beneath the covers,
As acid tears soak my skin.
Burning every inch of life,
Demanding payment for my sin.

As they burn at my weaknesses,
I hate myself more than ever.
My life has lost all meaning,
Friends, family, love, gone forever.

This emptiness that rots in me,
Is spreading such a stench.
Everybody moves away,
As I sit alone in this deep trench.

My self loath is shutting me off,
Keeping you so far away.
But I need you more than ever,
I need you here today.

Like the cloud that engulfs my soul,
And that shadows my weak heart,
I am left without warmth,
As I so slowly fall apart.

End this pain now,
I beg of you, let me go.
If only you could see this wreck,
Than surely you would know. . .

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Hmm, good one...I know we've been drifting apart, but well, that just happens everytime, girl, I'll still be here if u need me...=)

  • 18 years ago

    by lana

    WOW YOUR PAIN IS VERY CLEAR
    I HOPE YOUR DOING BETTER NOW AND
    YOUR POEMS ARE ALL GREAT AND SHOW THE FEELINGS DEEP WITHIN
    I LIKE THEM ALL AND THINK THAT YOU JUST NEED SOMEONE TO HELP YOU THROUGH THE SAD AND BAD TIMES
    IM HERE IF YOU NEED TO TALK

    AGAIN 5/5

    FROM
    LANA

  • 18 years ago

    by cLumsy

    A deep, penetrating sorrow that empties one's soul and leaves only the feeling of loneliness. A gut-wrenching poem. Please, a life is beautiful only if you see it that way. See it with your heart and soul.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreaming_Awake

    Wow wtf is kinda rude, soyy bout them, but yeah i loved it as alwoys and think that you nedd to keep up the fantastic work

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Wow, that is very deep feeling u hev...good one girl...as always...keep it up...

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