Gr8t poem i really loved it I love the way you write! Keep it up!

This poem has great flow. Great emotions. Great Poem. 5/5!!!

This is such a sad poem. it was really really good though, you are an awesome writer. good job, keep it up

Your really good at writing keep up the great work.^_^

This emptiness that rots in me''

Theres something about the word rot. It's moving in some wierd way for me.

Also 'so slowly'. *hugs* This poem is just, i loved it.

Lv A xxx

What a great poem i loved it!!!

And again, an amazing poem, great use of words to create a smooth overall scheme. 5/5

Wow, that is very deep feeling u hev...good one girl...as always...keep it up...

Wow wtf is kinda rude, soyy bout them, but yeah i loved it as alwoys and think that you nedd to keep up the fantastic work

A deep, penetrating sorrow that empties one's soul and leaves only the feeling of loneliness. A gut-wrenching poem. Please, a life is beautiful only if you see it that way. See it with your heart and soul.

WOW YOUR PAIN IS VERY CLEAR
I HOPE YOUR DOING BETTER NOW AND
YOUR POEMS ARE ALL GREAT AND SHOW THE FEELINGS DEEP WITHIN
I LIKE THEM ALL AND THINK THAT YOU JUST NEED SOMEONE TO HELP YOU THROUGH THE SAD AND BAD TIMES
IM HERE IF YOU NEED TO TALK

AGAIN 5/5

FROM
LANA

Hmm, good one...I know we've been drifting apart, but well, that just happens everytime, girl, I'll still be here if u need me...=)