by Princess09 Mar 15, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Tears that won't go away; |
by Tara Kay
Aww, it was so sad. The imagery was good, the flow was awesome, the words were strong and i loved the whole things, keep it up my friend |
Some nice words that flowed smoothly together. Some great imagery. Well done. Not exactly great with some stanzas but it got a message across. Your last two stanzas ended on a strong note. |
by Bridgette
Wow.. that one almost made me cry. It was so beautifully written with something everyone can relate to. And I loved the stanza: |
by Jen
Wow... this poem blew me away... its so very unique.. and i love the way you have different sections... in a way... i seriously... im speachless... this poem is sorrowfully beautiful and i can relate to more then one stanza... im in love with your poems :) 5/5 -Jen- |
I loved this one! very sad...but i liked it! 5/5! |