Tattered and Torn

by Kaylee   Mar 15, 2006


Tattered and torn
Why does hearing your voice
bring me so close to tears?
How could I never have felt
this before meeting you?

I’m sitting here crying
remembering the words that you said.
I wish you could just see
how worried you had made me.

I was lying there last night
thinking the worst.
I had butterflies when I called
but anger when you were there.

Thinking you didn’t care enough
to even let me know you were safe.
Now I don’t know what to do.
I never experienced heartbreak.

Your voice didn’t sound right.
It just made me feel so wrong.

Until you can decided whether you
want me in your life or not, I will
forever be waiting here.

Tattered and torn.

*based on when a friend of mine didn't talk to me for two days. Since he lives far away it made me really worry about him*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow, Kaylee-- This was really different to your new stuff. Still good though, just different. Wow. You've come along way in your writing though, Keep it up!

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Oh dear - I will start crying in a minute if I continue :) Another excellent poem - what more can I say? Just keep up the writing, and continue writing at this standard because I love it xD

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Awesome!!!!!!!!!! I loved it!
    well done
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    I really liked this it had a great feeling to it. Very powerful and meaningful.

    All the Best
    Sondos

  • 18 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    I like the over all feel of it but you might want to organize it into stanzas because it makes it a little easier to read.
    I was a little lost with this line:
    "I wish you could see just"
    is that supposed to be that way or is just and see supposed to be switched around?

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