This feeling

by max   Mar 15, 2006


This feeling inside
What is it called?
Oh yes...
Depression

This cant be healthy
This cant be natural
It can't be
Can it?

I'm feeling so low
Life never goes my way
Why won't it just end?
It's not to much to ask

I feel so alone
Why?
I feel so hollow
Why?

Will this feeling subside?
I hope so
But thats all I can do
Hope

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  • 17 years ago

    by claire

    Hmmm - v poignant. nice mix of hopelessness and hope - the oh yes line could possibly be better, but i might just be criticizing it cause it sticks out a little. i kind of like it. all of it.

  • 18 years ago

    by kei

    I really liked your choice of words, and the way that you put it all together, it didn't have the best flow, and i'm juss gettin started, so maybe i'm not the best person to be doin this, but over all the poem was great!

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