Hey that was an AWESOME poem! seriously never seen another poem like it on this site sweetie! keep up the great work!!! just curious... how come did u comment on WTS (what to say) lol just curious! *hugs* catch ya l8er!

Great Job
love your detail
through out the poem
and the warm giving him love
kinda has a metorphoric value to it..dont u think?
Great job
keep it up
5/5
~TBOY~ (torn because of you)

That was so...ah IT WAS COOL!! I love the way you did the opening line! Great job..You need more like that:)