Wow, that was good, you really portrayed it in a way that made me feel like I was the person this "girl" was torturing, for lack of a better word.
I'm glad I inspired you to write this. Keep up the good work, and if you ever want to talk AIM = aiclsgdskse.

-corey

Oh my god! What an amazing poems. You are so talented, I love your writting! I'm gonna go read part 2