Awesome Juls, you may not like it but I do, [maybe cause my pen names in it...who knows]. the message in this poem is great, I like that you say paint the silence instead of ....[insert metapohor here] Keep it up and always smile, Juls remember I'm always here for Hubbster

Love you
Jenn

O I love this poem! So wonderful. Loved every part of it, and I really enjoyed reading it. You're so creative, the way you play with just words is amazing.

Lotsaaaaaa love
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Excellent, reminds me of keeping feelings in, a bad trait of mine . . .

Brilliantly writtren peice, very well put togeter and very clear

I really like the way you worded this poem. great job!

Great poem!! Freedom of speach is really important nowadays. I've never really read anything like this poem. It was really good. And, I liked how you asked questions. Like.. "This is what we want in life, isn't it?" ..Really good job! Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.