Should have known

by m i s s k a t e l y n   Mar 15, 2006


I should have known
That soon you would be gone

that you would give
me up and leave me all alone

to clean up the mess
the one you made of me

that night when you
wouldn't even speak to me

I'm here alone
with no one to hold

you broke my heart to pieces
and left me here to cry

now I think life
won't get happy

and so why not
just lay down to die

*Plz Comment*

~Katie a broken heart~

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kimber

    Wow!! So much emotion! I'm so sorry girl!! I know how this feels! GREAT POEM!! I truly hope things get better for you!

  • 16 years ago

    by m3G4NncOdY

    Hey i think this poem is awsome i dont care what no one says. u need to keep on writing!
    :-)

  • 17 years ago

    by Getting Out of the Sea

    Really, I don't want to hurt your feelings about this poem but i have to give you 3/5 because sometimes you need to make a sense and add something more interest. I'm sorry but you did your best try.
    -K

  • 17 years ago

    by reborn

    I really liked the first 5 stanzas cuz they followed each other so smoothly and had nice rimes but then the rest of the poem doesn't follow, no more rimes... a bit disappointing especially with such a good start. 4/5. why so much? cuz even tho there were no more rimes the text is good

  • 18 years ago

    by Sharon

    Good work, nice job, i loved it, keep it up!!!!

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