~*Sounds like you put alot of emtion in it. . . its really cool how u can do that great work tho 5/5*~ XoXo
-Crazy

Geeze, and i thought i sounded sad. great poem by the way

Really good!!! keep writing! AWESOME!

Good work, nice job, i loved it, keep it up!!!!

I really liked the first 5 stanzas cuz they followed each other so smoothly and had nice rimes but then the rest of the poem doesn't follow, no more rimes... a bit disappointing especially with such a good start. 4/5. why so much? cuz even tho there were no more rimes the text is good

Really, I don't want to hurt your feelings about this poem but i have to give you 3/5 because sometimes you need to make a sense and add something more interest. I'm sorry but you did your best try.
-K

Hey i think this poem is awsome i dont care what no one says. u need to keep on writing!
:-)

Wow!! So much emotion! I'm so sorry girl!! I know how this feels! GREAT POEM!! I truly hope things get better for you!