Comments : Trapped Within The Alphabet

  • 18 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Hey, I really liked this poem. I know how you feel, sometimes it does get hard to put down everything you're feeling into words. Good Job!

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    Love the flow of the first 4 stanzas, but somehow the last stanza seems to be a bit out of place... just my opinion though... Great write! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie

    I love this one too. i can really relate to it in a way...

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I did like this poem but you might want to fix some of the very minor spelling mistakes :) Also the last stanza didn't seem to go with the other ones but I did enjoy the last line.

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Wonderful poem. Nice and clearly written. Great flow and rhymes. I like the honesty in this poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem reflects a common feeling of writers of verse and it is something I have given a lot of thought. Sometimes words cannot express a feeling, but it does not stop us from trying

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    But don't you see, this poem was proof that you are a poet, that you are about to write. You were able to write down your emotion of fustration at being unable to write a poem, that counts love. Poems are a lot of soul, there is no wrong way to write them, there really isn't. Write about what you know and you really can't go wrong. You can ask for advice and read other poems for ideas, but I promise you that you are not poetically challanged.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    It was okay and despite slight flaws it expressed some common fault among many who cannot clearly use words. For that well done though the flow did mess up near the end.
    ~Faith

  • 18 years ago

    by Brigitte

    You not poet? Thats like saying I'm not addicted to chocolate! (Trys to hide chocolate stains that are all of my shirt) Heh! I somtimes feel like this as well and thats why i love this poem, I can relate! Your an awesome poet! If you don't believe me look at the faverotes award you have! Apparently you are one due to the fact that your on many peoples faverotes list (including mine) Never stop writting!

  • 18 years ago

    by .. !!-D a R r i N-!! ..

    This Poem Really Got Me Thinking. You Weren't Writing With Metaphors Or Similes, But Still Were Indirectly Making Your Point In Some Way. Beautifully Written.

    -Darrin

  • 18 years ago

    by .. !!-D a R r i N-!! ..

    Lol.. Wait A Minute. I Saw A Few Similes In There. I Went Back And Re-Read. My Apologies.

  • Wow You've Won Me Over With This One, You Have Remarkable Creativitiy In Your Writing That I Just All In All Admire! And I Think That If I Had Half Of The Ideas You Do My Poetry Would Definatley Improve 101%...I've Definatley Enjoyed My Read 5/5 All The Way
    xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Wow, Hun. This definitely expressed a LOT of emotion, and it was great. But I don`t think you`re any of those things. I think you`re you, a great writer. =D
    Maybe I`m a little lost at this whole theme because I read the two poems backward. But, that`s alright. =D I still get it.
    Great job! 5/5

    Samantha Hollywood

  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    That was really deep, and good... I liked the analogy of the alphabet, and being trapped inside your own words... But a least that's what I'm getting from it. I give it a 5/5

    Ravyn