Hey. omg this poem wuz so sad. it put a tear in my eye. well keep up da work on ur poems. bye

You have talent continue to use it : )

Aww, that's really sad, the last stanza really hit the nail on the head there. heart-wrenching stuff. Well done on another great write :) x

Nice work, really sweet, and you got your messege across well!!

Good peice, the flow is a little rough in places but recovers quickly. the expressions strong and content well portrayed.