I like this, thought maybe the moon repetition in the second stanza was a bit much, but love the last stanza.This has a surreal quality that I haven't seen much from many poets on this site and personally I have always liked.And that makes it stand out.Impressive piece.

Ya, what can i say, it had to be that way or it wasnt real

I LOVE the last stanza, I love the imagery, but the moon in the second stanza is a little repetetive. all in all though it's a good poem! keep writing Blessings

Beautifully written. strong imagery and powerful right thru.

good luck and peace
shobhana

It left me speachless,