True death

by louma   Jan 24, 2004


A couple of Day ago
I felt as though i was gonna die,
It felt true
And it ain't no lie

I was dying
Dieing from inside
I couldn't stop it,
There was no one beside

2 things that can die
your body and your soul
your body is when your heart stops beating
your soul is when you stop living

its kinda like being lost
and kinda being carefree
you cant concentrate
and you just cant flee,...it cant be

you feel like your dieing
but its actually your soul
if you don't help it
its gonna turn to coal...

and if it does
you just loose
its like a dream
where you never hit snooze

and if it doesn't
and you help your soul in time
you can succeed
B-4 you turn to slime

You feel refreshed
And kinda new
You can be happy
And eat some stew

So don't let it die
Your soul that is
It never wont
If you keep it as is

I can keep writing
About this forever
But i got time
That i gotta discover

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  • 20 years ago

    by James

    i though it was great

  • 20 years ago

    by louma

    man youre right, i read it again...kinda doesnt make sence,...it did at the moment tho

  • 20 years ago

    by **Just Her**

    some of the verses in ur poem were good... but i think u just started givin up after a while cuz it just doesnt sound good once gettin to the end.. once u read in more.... sorry