Comments : It's better said than done

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    It's pretty good. There's no rhyming in it, but that's ok.

    The last phrase is pretty surpising.

    Well done!
    Keep writing
    Lotsaaaaaaa love
    -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Joy

    Well it was an impromptu kind of poem it just pop out my head... thanks i really want to improve my writing... before i wasn't really fond of writing but lately i've been trying to discover myself and found out that writing can be form of expressing yourself... thanks