Nitin, i think this is one of the best pieces of your work! the rhyme, the flow, the choice of words is just amazing!

fantastic! it's easy to see your life is filled with love.

good luck and peace
shobhana

Omg! wow..that is honestly one of the best love poems i have ever read.
It's so heartwarming to be 'witness' in some way of such a beautiful expression of love.
All the best
xoxo

I have never heard a more perfect definition of being in love than this. I'm sure anyone who has ever been in love would know what you mean.

'crush me within your warm arms
let every piece of mine enter your soul
read between the lines as i adore your charm
crush my heart and paste it around yours
let them beat as one, forever from now on'

I'm sure even you dont know how much deapth these lines of yours have. Ever since I read them, I'm drowning in the deapth of your passion. Outstanding piece indeed.

Lots of Love
Michelle

Haha awww, this is so sweet:) Wonderfully written. hope to talk to you soon.
Monique

So romantic........kya baat hai??? the surrounding is smelling good!!!

glad to hear that u hav cum out of dark poems and now u r full of love........

all the best!
luv,
Bharti

Beautifully written 0nce again. u have a way with w0rds. this was tuching. great j0b!!! =]

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

How do you think is the best way to write a poem?
Love Bronwyn

Congrats dear!!! wow thats gr8 that ur love poems are on top page.....i feel so happy that u hav done it for love poems too far aside from sad poems....

all the very best.....

luv,
Bharti

Congrats Sweety, its great to see that both of your poems are where they belong.

Love
Michelle

As you said "all this, only a one in love would understand" great job on this poem, I really liked it!!! 5/5

This is one of the bets poems i have read in a while. It is very true that only one in love would understand. It's a great feeling to be able to understand. Don't ever let that feeling go.
LOVE,
Lil' Momma

I do know what you mean. I thought it was good.

It was awesome, i thought that was the best poem i ever read

What a great poem... It really made sense.. You have a unique touch.. well done

dave x

Wow this poem is soo awesome! 5/5. i loved it

This poem is absolutely awesome, keep up the good work!!! 5/5

xoxo

Another fantastic poem , I have added you to my fav's so keep writing hun and thanks 4 the comment take care sarah x

Nitin
What a feeling love gives us. Then also the worst pain ever. I never got to know you like this. It is good to see at one time you were this happy.

crush me within your warm arms
let every piece of mine enter your soul
read between the lines as i adore your charm
crush my heart and paste it around yours
let them beat as one, forever from now on
take these wings of mine and fly free like wind
i know you are my angel of promise land
all this, only a one in love would understand

I hope you find this again dost. You deserve every happiness in life.
Love Cindy