by Jessica Mar 16, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
As the light of day fills the sky |
by Sean Allen
"And as the light fades away |
by Darien
Beautiful imagery. Good poem. |
Wow, short yet jammed packed with details! gr8 work again! 5/5 |
by Jenna Balkin
I LOVE FLOWERS! |
by Brigitte
Awe thats so cute! Sweet and simple! For some reason I can never carry off a nature poem very well... they just seem to turn out wrong... but i adore reading other people's nature poems! Your poem was so short and sweet that it reminded me of a little girl sitting on her lawn while twirling a flower in her hand and saying your poem! |