by Always4You Mar 16, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
family
My Sweet Sister |
by Tara Kay
Wow, you are a great poet, dont let anyone tell you different. keep it up |
Hey I thought that was good...But i kinda think your ending should be fixed a little. I think you should add on a little more or change your rhyming at the end..great other than that!! Keep it up! |
Lovely! I love your poems! And hey, our names are very similar! ^_^ |