by StMario Mar 16, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Noah was a drinker |
by Tammy
Oh Mario, That was wonderful. You seem to know your bible..lol |
by PS
This was good. i liked the way it flowed and it made me laugh, whether it was supposed to or not :/ i liked it though. |
by StMario
Oops.. my comment above was not meant for me... (smiling) silly me... |
by StMario
It is good to write about what you know.. you always end up asking and answering your ownself while others continue to being about slander.. they are weak and you are strong.. |
by Kaylee
I really liked this but I think you could imrpove the way the stanza's flowed. The reason I read this one was because I saw that it had no comments yet. So I'm glad to be the first. Nice word choice and alot of things I didn't know which made me think. And the best poems make you think, right? |