by Kaylee
I really liked this but I think you could imrpove the way the stanza's flowed. The reason I read this one was because I saw that it had no comments yet. So I'm glad to be the first. Nice word choice and alot of things I didn't know which made me think. And the best poems make you think, right? |
by StMario
It is good to write about what you know.. you always end up asking and answering your ownself while others continue to being about slander.. they are weak and you are strong.. |
by StMario
Oops.. my comment above was not meant for me... (smiling) silly me... |
by PS
This was good. i liked the way it flowed and it made me laugh, whether it was supposed to or not :/ i liked it though. |
by Tammy
Oh Mario, That was wonderful. You seem to know your bible..lol |