Wow this poem is really good. i loved it! 5/5*

Thats a good poem! do u only write dark poems or poems close that?

That is a really powerful piece of writing. You used some very strong words, and I love how you used Old English with the 'Thy'. 5/5

That is a really powerful piece of writing. You used some very strong words, and I love how you used Old English with the 'Thy'. 5/5