by BleedingAngel Mar 16, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Standing on the corner |
Damn, thats really good |
by pseudo
Wow. You have so much passion. And its true sometimes you wonder what the heck is going on in this world when things like that happen.. its really crazy. I love how in this poem you tell a story in it too because this reality for some girls is becomming too real. Very emotional and powerful message. Amazing job |
"She lets him touch her body |
by Sole
I thoguht the ending was great - Her trying to stand strong, and having to hide behind a facade of smiles and strength. |
Wow, they r about my age, I might commit suicide if I was them, so sorry 4 them...life is always unfair...y do these hev 2 happen...:( |