Your poems have such deep lyrics and meanings - There is so much to see in your writing, and it sometimes takes a pari of glasses to see exactly what the meaning is. The sort of poem that captures you - and it's not possible to take your eyes away until you've read the whole thing through :)

Peace. [Sole]

The choppy lines were an excellent format choice as well as the question at the end. This is the second poem I read of yours *The first being Orange Peel but I do not think I commented on that one yet.* I like your poems not really for the word choice or the formats but because it feels like everyone can make their own meaning out of them. Your poems are really deep but it takes me a few times to read them. At least by the time I've read them a few times, I can find some kind of meaning I never thought was possible.

Wow this is a smart poem
I don't know if I'm smart enough to understand it all, but the bits I do are great - I like the verse about courage I agree with it entirely.
You are evidently talented

Very interesting poem, honestly i don't understand all of it but it's really nice and thx for accurating and helping me improve in my poem, thx

You have a great style of writing, very unique, the format of the poem is really original and your poem seems deep from the heart.

Very thought-provoking....I love your use of rhetorical questions....not so sure about the link with the title...maybe you could explain...

[lostlaureate - come find me]