Comments : Perfect Life?

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    I know how this feels.
    I've been there before.
    To be trapped in a room
    Without windows or doors.

    I loved that stanza... very well written... I liked ur observation... good work..
    keep writing.. 5/5

    Much Love,
    Ipsita

  • 18 years ago

    by Danica

    Nicely written

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    You have a talented insight into the reality of people.