Aww...itz cute...i love it...5/5...good job....itz sad but good .....

Melissa

"She watched his fragile body
being lifted by the crew.
As they passed, their dark eyes met.
He said softly, "Baby, I still love you." "

wow... so sad, yet beautiful!!
welcome to the club! we hope you have fun!! take care,
-xXx-

Expressive poem hunny, Nice plot to it... but I'm very very distracted at the = sign in the middle of it! I was like whaaaaaaa 0_0, lol I dunno, what ever I'm weird, Keep it up and coming, and thank you sooo much for joining the club, I'm so happy to have you aboard, now to get a hold of ruthie *starts planning* [[shes been super hard to reach lately!]] lol anyways Im out =)

Jenn!!

What a powerful poem. I, like Fighter, felt the lines beginningShe watched his fragile body. were by far the most powerful of the entire poem. Great work

Great poem i love your style of writting you could go far

OMG I L0VE THIS POEM!! its s0 sad im like crying!! omg babe ur sooo talented!! 5/5 this is like one of the best poems ever!! i l0ve the stroyline nd detail!! well done!!! plz chek out my poems! luv maddison

This is sad.. and i like it alot... soo if i may ask .. what influniced you on this poem