by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child Mar 17, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
Darkness surrounded |
Great! ^^ as always, I can't wait to red the rest ^^ |
by luna bella
OMG! this is great got me blushing (jk) loved it |
by PoetryHeart
And how old are you.......? jk. anywayz, nicely written. your a good writer. i added you to my favs. your awesome. keep writing Ash! |
I really liked this poem. To some people sex is only something they toy around with. But your poem simply explains that there is more than just fun in the art of "making love". Very well written. 5/5 Over this side. |
by Tamra
Wow. Really great. I loved it. 5/5 Can't wait to read more. |