Comments : The forgotten dream

  • 18 years ago

    by Milton

    I loved it, I've been feeling the same way. I can see how lonely the poem is. Good stuff. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by emmaroo

    Its very good and dark
    well done
    xxxx
    emma
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Liana

    That is really good i like it a lot keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by -Usmi-

    Rele well written .. but try to keep the lines a little short .. other thn tht great

  • 17 years ago

    by NeoDaDevil

    Since u had it as featured i thought i'd read it....i rarely read poems or even comment onem unless they are from friends...but good thing i read it....really impressive work