I love the messege this poem holds. It's an important lessong.
And yes I think every word you've said is right and true. And I have respect for that. There are not many people these days, who have there eyes wide open, to see the truth. But you have..
I think it's nice written. I love the rhyming. It flows. It really does.
Well done, keep writing, keep improving =) I can't wait to read more!!!
Lotsaaaaaaaaa love
-xxx-
Ps: Thank you for your sweet email. =) We will keep in touch. Feel free to private messege me whenever you want. =)