Wooahh..#1 i can tell you ahve a lot to say about the world and how selfish it is which i can totally relate to and agree. i really think the most powerful verse in this poem would be
The world was once a rose,
But now is choked by its own thorns.
Its beauty overshadowed be evil,
And caught between Satan's horns.
that is such a beautiful metephor. i like your vocabulary in this poem, the descriptive words u used aswell:).. i really enjoy ur poetry aswell and no ur not freaking me out at all:P i look forward to reading ur comments:) id actually liek to get to knoe u a bit better!..keep in touch!:> elisa-

By the way, i was wondering who sings the song caroline, im interested to hear it!:)

This is an amazing poem and very true. I'm happy to know that you have hope in God, even when the it seems that this cold world is falling even further than it has. thank you so much for you comment it means alot.
Godbless,
erica

Hey anton! how are you?:) thats great:P lol i listened to that song-great choice of music! i really liked it and i see how u related it to my poem. i like the singers voice a lot, its so soothing. my fave part is
And when you're feeling all alone and you can't go on
Remember I am here
And when you think you've gone too far
I'll meet you where you are
My arms are open wide

i love it! lol im listening to it again right now:) i didnt let the christian part throw me off either:P..do u by chance have an email? msn?..get back to me!:)..ttyl!..Elisa*

Hey anton: my email is bal.02@hotmail.com..i added u on msn!

AWESOME
i love it.
ur an awesome writer. and thanks for commenting on my poem

Another beautifully written and inspiring piece! love it! xXx

I like this poem a lot.Congratulations,you have done a good work.You're a great poet.Best regards,Michelle XxX