"I hope they don't get wet out there."
That part made me giggle.

I like this poem because it captures the essence of childish innocence....although, it does become somewhat repetitive near the end. Nevertheless, it was a great poem. Thanks for sharing!

Lovely and sweet and beautiful all at the same time. You capture a child's point of view excellently here
Sondos

That is such a cute poem :) The naievity (Or however you spell it) form the point of view of a child just makes the poem so fulfilling to read :)

Peace. [Sole]

Good poetry, some of the phrases were repetitive like 'cats + dogs' and 'trail mix' but otherwise I liked it. The only reason I mentioned the phrases was because they didnt seem to need repeating..5/5

Yeah, awesome is the word i use to describe this poem. wow. wow. i loved it.
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