Another good one, I like it, invasive, so who's p.o.v. were you writing from (point of view) psychiatrist, teacher, cousler, princaple, peer, ??? come on answers lol

good job
°•Thorn•°

Very interesting and sad, i enjoyed readin this peice

Excellent job, great theme. I would like to see more variety in this poem instead of repeated stanzas. Keep it up

Was good, sad but with a touch of hope i think the repetition is good but yeah i think it could go on longer (that also means i like it if i want to hear more lol :P) ALLY

This was really good!! Loved how you kept repeating that same stanza! It was great 5/5 =]

luv natalie x-x-x

P.s. Sorry if im taking awhile to do all the comments, Ive just got alot going on at the moment, But i will get them all done asap! =]

It sounded almost like a song. the repetision of the second stanza was very effective. i loved the way you chose to write it like you were talking to someone. an exellent poem

Ruby

Excellent job... loved it... this is the 1st poem I have read from you and indeed I will keep reading more... keep up the good work! 5/5

Excllent written. I have written some sad poems my self, you should check out "Just a little blood".
Love,
Line

Excllent written. I have written some sad poems my self, you should check out "Just a little blood".
Love,
Line