Now it's your turn

by karima   Jan 24, 2004


Your the girl
that ruined my life
when it got to much
I'd take a knife.

Dig it down
and dig it deep
just until
my blood would seep.

I'd cover it up
let no-one see
when I'd cut
I would feel free.

Then one day
I made a mistake
now my blood
was making a lake.

Then I dropped down
I fell to the floor
my mum ran up
and came through the door.

She knelt down
and called my name
but the answer
never came.

At my funeral
people cried
some wondered why
I had died.

Now fire surrounds me
my body will burn
so I'll be waiting
for when It's your turn.

Plz could you vote

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  • 20 years ago

    by karima

    hi thanks for all your comments they are greatly appreciated!

  • 20 years ago

    by Roula

    That was very powerful I liked the way you chose your words, great job

  • 20 years ago

    by Gary

    Deep.very deep...how tha words put a picture in my mind...keep writing..u got talent girl.