Emotional Suicide

by RetroRavey   Mar 17, 2006


I've committed emotional suicide,
Good riddance to the pain.
It only held me back,
From what was mine to claim.
I've killed all of the sadness,
Killed all of the joy,
killed all of the things,
That made me like your toy.
A roller coaster of emotion,
That, is what I was.
Until I killed the reasons,
To kill an emotional buzz.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    Umm this one was a little confusing and I was lost on a few lines sort of like they didn't seem to fit jusr right.
    ~~Retniapdoob

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Emotional Suicide. Very catchy. And, I liked this poem. Although it wasn't long. I really liked it. It was straight to the point. Everything flowed alright. I don't think there's anything I'd change. =D 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetess Lana

    Short yet good and to the point!!! i miss u and cant wait for august to come around!!!!!!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by **~Lucy~**

    Good poem :) i loved it xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Great Poem loved it.. Please comment and rate my poems also

    ~!*Meaghen~!*
    ~!*FallenTears~!*

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