Oh hun this is so wonderful. It came right from your heart. So much pain in this poem. Wow. I truly loved it. It;s so wonderfully writtin.

I'm impressed!

Lotsaaaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

This is really good Sarah. I know how you feel...my grandma and great grandma died in the same year around a month apart. And I wondered why god would do this to my family. But I relized i had to move on, I still think of what made him think that they deserved to die. But I try and remember the good things about them and all the laughes we shared with them. :) 5/5

Mallori

Amazing.....i just loved these lines...
Why do I scream at god I don't want to live.
Why do I tell him I hate him then
ask him to forgive

i do the same wid God.

good job dear!

Wow. Another beautiful poem doll. Your poems are just like magic. how you put them together,the lines and such.
Kat

Lovely!
these lines are so natural
Why do I scream at god I don't want to live.
Why do I tell him I hate him then
ask him to forgive.

if u get time read my poem- unbeatable faith...this is sumthing abt u mentioned in these lines.....

luv,
Bharti

Good poem. sad but good.. keep it up.. 5/5

Sarah i could never be abel to go through out life like u did. u r strong and admire you for what you have been abel to overcome. you have turned ur emotions into beautiful and heart filled poetry. keep up this outstanding writing xoxo
love;veronica

Wow. so know how you feel.

Wow this poem is fantastic. you are a great writer. an inspiration!! keep it up...

Thank you so much for the comment. It meant a lot.
I really like this poem. It has a lot of meaning to it. I know how you feel. I've felt this way for over a year now.

5/5