My Problems

by Hannah Tiernan   Mar 17, 2006


My tears fall
my heart beats faster
my wrists start to bleed
my life is a disaster

My mind is blank
my feelings fall out
my body goes numb
my friends i doubt

My eyes start to hurt
My arm becomes sore
my head statrs to hurt
my body is shaking to the core

my friends go away
my pain gets stronger
my prayers go unanswered
my cuts become longer

my fears come true
my family starts to cry
my heart stops beating
my problems and I die

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  • 18 years ago

    by anonymous

    I like this alot. short but u get your point acros perfectly. i say 5/5 :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Guilty By Design

    Hey,
    You commented on one of my poems so I thought I would do the same. This is pretty good. I like it.

  • 18 years ago

    by SilentTearDrops

    Omg, that was really good. i can so relate in every single way! and i love poems i can relate to! everythibng in that poem is how my life is right now, and if thats how it is foryuo, i wish you the best and hope yuo find happiness. well wonderful writing! keep it up! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Great poem keep writing and take care hun sarah x

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