Still Daddy

Very sad

Wow. I loved this one aswell. Really deep. Parents devorcing is hard to go through. Another awesome write.

`taleee

P.S I went to do the other one you asked, But I've already done it. So I'm just gonna choose another one mmkay?

This is well written and very poignant. What I also liked (and I went back and read it a 2nd time) is how the emphasis really is placed on sadness; there's a distinct lack of a temptation to be judgemental. I like it.

From the angle of a child ... to the dreams of a father! Beautiful, emotional write. What a daughter wouldn't give to read these words when old enough to understand. Save and share!

Feeling sorry for you after i read this poem of yours. i jus pray that nobody experiences this bitter moment in life. on the whole, it is a poem well woven and meant for matured readers. as the poem advances line by line the poem creates a deeper impact on the reader as a parent and child. stay in touch. love, bhavin.