Comments : Another statistic?

  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    I really did think this was very meaningful. You have taken a subject that I have always thought about it and portrayed it very well in this poem
    Sondos

  • 18 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    Well it was a pretty good poem...it flowed o.k. and no lines really stuck out and made me want to read it again and again but it was still a good poem....but not one of your best.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aw, Thats sad. And im sorry to hear that this poem is true. Im always here if u need someone to talk to kk.
    5/5 for this one, I loved it. Keep up the great work =]

    natz x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    This poem is really sad and like natalie (I think thats it) said I'm sorry to hear this poem is true. It was a good poem though.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Beautiful poem. The flow is excellent - and there is so much said in just those few lines that really strikes out. You are definately going on my favourites :)

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie

    Very strong. im really sorry that happened to you, but im glad youre working on a way to get through it. i have a few experiences that gave some real meaning to that poem. awesome, i love it

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a very powerful poem revealing the product and pain of abuse

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Hey hun, I know where your coming from, isn't it wonderful to be a number? I was fingered and groped by someone who was supposed to love me. And this poem has other meanings for me to, all the crap I've been through and I'm only fifteen, (almost sixteen.) Boys can just stuck sometimes, I mean I don't think I have ever heard of a girl sexually assulting a guy! It just doesn't happen that way. Hugs baby, poetry is a powerful way to help heal wounds, and fade some scars.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Sorry for the spelling and grammar errors.

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    You said "it could mean anything for you" which I'm relieved about because when reading it meant something different to me than dealing with the pain of sexual abuse. I fall into a medical statisic and thats what this made me think of. I thought it was well written and different to other poems in many ways. Well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    Wow
    The use of 'statistic' is brilliant, it makes the subject of the poem seem significant to the World, when clearly she is not.
    I loved it =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I think the poem was good, and was meaningful. Could have been longer but some good points.
    Love Tara-Kay
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    Another great poem. Extremely sad!! sorry to hear its true, I went through something like that too about a yr ago and it stinks!! had a few lines i liked a lot like
    She refuses to look at her
    reflection in the mirror.
    Afraid to see.
    over all great!!
    ~~Sweetie

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    I loved this poem! it just made me think. i was simply amazed you did a great job...
    Emma 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ~~Lindsay Woods~~

    I loved this one!..it made me think..and the best poems are the ones that make me think!..very well done..i give it a 5/5!
    ~*Linz*~

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    This is really sad but an exellent poem the "she was me" end s the poem so welll and the title is also catchy well done xxALLYxx

  • 18 years ago

    by XxXangeltearsXxX

    I feel it
    i can feel this poem
    first feeling i have had since what i went through
    that lets me know im not alone

    She has bite marks on
    her tongue from the words
    she didn’t say.

    thats fricking amazing
    you are truly talented
    i love you

  • 18 years ago

    by StMario

    Love your will to express yourself... healing is a process... don't allow this experience to enslave you.. Good to let it out, and move forward. I hope that you done the right thing so he will not mentally harm nor physically destroy someone elses dreams... Keep producing your material it is Therapy for others.. again, I am sorry that it happened but glad that you are using it to helping others....

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Strong poem and words. Really great poem. It has it's own uniqueness and i just loved reading it. Sorry it's true though cos it's so sad :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Synh

    I really enjoyed reading this. It shows that not everything in the world is going to be just a walk in the park. Beautifully written. 5/5