by Sondos
I really did think this was very meaningful. You have taken a subject that I have always thought about it and portrayed it very well in this poem |
Well it was a pretty good poem...it flowed o.k. and no lines really stuck out and made me want to read it again and again but it was still a good poem....but not one of your best. |
by Natalie
Aw, Thats sad. And im sorry to hear that this poem is true. Im always here if u need someone to talk to kk. |
by MaSkEdSoUl
This poem is really sad and like natalie (I think thats it) said I'm sorry to hear this poem is true. It was a good poem though. |
by Sole
Beautiful poem. The flow is excellent - and there is so much said in just those few lines that really strikes out. You are definately going on my favourites :) |
by Katie
Very strong. im really sorry that happened to you, but im glad youre working on a way to get through it. i have a few experiences that gave some real meaning to that poem. awesome, i love it |
This is a very powerful poem revealing the product and pain of abuse |
Hey hun, I know where your coming from, isn't it wonderful to be a number? I was fingered and groped by someone who was supposed to love me. And this poem has other meanings for me to, all the crap I've been through and I'm only fifteen, (almost sixteen.) Boys can just stuck sometimes, I mean I don't think I have ever heard of a girl sexually assulting a guy! It just doesn't happen that way. Hugs baby, poetry is a powerful way to help heal wounds, and fade some scars. |
Sorry for the spelling and grammar errors. |
by N J Thornton
You said "it could mean anything for you" which I'm relieved about because when reading it meant something different to me than dealing with the pain of sexual abuse. I fall into a medical statisic and thats what this made me think of. I thought it was well written and different to other poems in many ways. Well done. |
by azlan26
Wow |
by Tara Kay
I think the poem was good, and was meaningful. Could have been longer but some good points. |
by Princess09
Another great poem. Extremely sad!! sorry to hear its true, I went through something like that too about a yr ago and it stinks!! had a few lines i liked a lot like |
by Emma
I loved this poem! it just made me think. i was simply amazed you did a great job... |
I loved this one!..it made me think..and the best poems are the ones that make me think!..very well done..i give it a 5/5! |
by holly
This is really sad but an exellent poem the "she was me" end s the poem so welll and the title is also catchy well done xxALLYxx |
I feel it |
by StMario
Love your will to express yourself... healing is a process... don't allow this experience to enslave you.. Good to let it out, and move forward. I hope that you done the right thing so he will not mentally harm nor physically destroy someone elses dreams... Keep producing your material it is Therapy for others.. again, I am sorry that it happened but glad that you are using it to helping others.... |
by Amanda
Strong poem and words. Really great poem. It has it's own uniqueness and i just loved reading it. Sorry it's true though cos it's so sad :) |
by Synh
I really enjoyed reading this. It shows that not everything in the world is going to be just a walk in the park. Beautifully written. 5/5 |