by Momentary Relapse Mar 17, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Amorous gazes pierce his soul |
by Elapsed
Very nice write.. excellent imagery great flow and structure.. Well done.. Keep them coming |
by DAYLON
I have taken timeout to read some more of your work. You must have got a book out as the work you write is awesome. |
by Rocky
Such a sad but true poem. i loved the imagery especially in the last stanza. keep it up. and would you read some of mine if you want to. especially - your soul asks why- and tell me what you think |
Ohmigosh, SAD! |
by Sophie
Well done. a really good write! so much emotion and the flow is brilliant. |