Try not ryhiming. It might suit you better or try describing more in depth. Just trying to help.

Thanks. You know, I wrote this years ago!

Hey MY BEAUTIFUL GIRLY YOU ARE SUCK A WONDERFUL WRITER DON'T GET UPSET IF PEOPLE ARE TRYING TO HELP YOU OUT THO GOOD JOB 5/5 FOO SURE!

This is the first poem i ecer wrote, and kept. i wrote it when i was seven