Thats very powerful portrait of human emotions,few words but message is clear.

"Screams from a murdered heart,
rustling the nights serenity,"

great lines.

Thanks for comment , appreaciate it.

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chavii.

Woho! Sweeped me off my feet! I think it's wonderful. It so short but powerful!
Brilliant use of words. Nice writting. Seems you have a style of your own, which is very very good

Well done! I'm impressed

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Wow, i've got to say this is the most unique poem i've ever read. I like your stlye, its different.

Great write, very deep, it made me think, even though the words were so blunt. Made it all the more intriguing.

Nice usage of words, powerful. Keep up the awesome work! 5/5

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~Angie~
xoxo