This poem is so good. i love this part

" Smiling through the rain
Which trickles down my window
Which trickles down my face
And stains my wrists
Flowers bloom, the sun shines
In dusty memories
Ghost fingers stroke my cheek
Then run away with the wind "

great poem keep it up. 5/5

Oh that poem made me cry and its very hard to make me cry! is this true? i write songs too, good on you! please get back 2 me, i want to no if its true

Hey great poem!! I cant write songs, but u can :) 5/5

Nice job. Sad but nice job.
5/5
-vino

I love writing songs. I do it all the time not really much anymore like i don't really write poems all that often but hey your a great song writer also. very talented. i love this song. amazing job. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.