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by AmandaHall Mar 18, 2006 category : Friendship, family / family
When you slipped out of my arms my world fell apart~ You were my little brother but you were ten time more~ But when I turned the corner and couldnt see your face~ I tryed everything to go back~ Everything was rushing though my mind, memories of you and I. But when I let you go I didnt let you go forever~ Cause forever is to long~ But I'll will miss you for now~ When we meet again my life will begin~\"Detocated to my little brother who lives out of state, I miss him so much I decided to write a poem about him\" "So if you read it rate it PLZ" :D TY
by me
Really good not that bad keep it up :]
by Declen A
Hey, i miss my little brother to, but he isnt like out of state, hes dead. really great poem, i bet he misses you. 5/5.