Your love means my life

by Candy   Mar 18, 2006


Do you love me like i love u?
can we make it work through all our fighting
all these tears i shed for you
as you shed no thought for me
it hurts to see how you don't care
your friend, your thought, your heart
whats it saying stay or leave?
leave me and drowned me forever in my sorrow
believing your hurt full words
all my time wasted my broken heart
my old life my suicidal ways
you changed that saved me
when your gone whats saving me whats stopping me
nothing my suicidal ways will come back, slowly but painfully
my wrists full of scars as the bloody blade touching my skin as i pull away
Nothing happens so i tie the rope
as i tie it to the pole and make a knot in the rope
i slip my head into the knot and push the chair away
as i slow fade away i realize I'm doing something horrible
our memorize flashing before my eyes
but its to late i died

Suicide-babe

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  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    This reminds me of my first stage of poetry. it's actually spooky =) I know this is an older poem but I think you could benift from taking this poem and revamping it. I'm not implying its bad but it could be better if you split it into stanza's, it would help the flow, and it would be more eye pleasing to the reader.

    The things I love and wouldnt change a bit is the raw emotion I feel in this, the way you started and ended this poem. I hope to read more of you poems soon! and Please excause me if my suggestions sound rude.

    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristen

    I feel that way too i miss my true love...:(

  • 18 years ago

    by *Emmy*

    Dammn
    is that t rue? i mean.. except for the dead part.. cuz obviously ur not dead.. but thats really good

    i like it alot
    keep up the good work~
    and iknow someone whos just like that...
    and yah.. lol she like hella liked this guy, and then he dumped her, becuse he didnt think he could trust her, and he had like saved her life a few times.. and she stopped cutting and everthing.. then she went back to doing it all over agan... but worse..
    soo yahh i really like it tho!
    keep it up
    xoxo
    ~emmy

  • 18 years ago

    by crystal

    Coo i know how u feel

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Wow! great poem..loved it keep it up Xox Laura Marie

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