Comments : Your love means my life

  • 18 years ago

    by vero

    Omg i love this poem. i like dark poems so this is one of my faviortes. I love the way u write how u relized it was a bad idea and anyone who reads this shoud acknowlage that. ok best of luck to u.

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Wow! great poem..loved it keep it up Xox Laura Marie

  • 18 years ago

    by crystal

    Coo i know how u feel

  • 18 years ago

    by *Emmy*

    Dammn
    is that t rue? i mean.. except for the dead part.. cuz obviously ur not dead.. but thats really good

    i like it alot
    keep up the good work~
    and iknow someone whos just like that...
    and yah.. lol she like hella liked this guy, and then he dumped her, becuse he didnt think he could trust her, and he had like saved her life a few times.. and she stopped cutting and everthing.. then she went back to doing it all over agan... but worse..
    soo yahh i really like it tho!
    keep it up
    xoxo
    ~emmy

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristen

    I feel that way too i miss my true love...:(

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    This reminds me of my first stage of poetry. it's actually spooky =) I know this is an older poem but I think you could benift from taking this poem and revamping it. I'm not implying its bad but it could be better if you split it into stanza's, it would help the flow, and it would be more eye pleasing to the reader.

    The things I love and wouldnt change a bit is the raw emotion I feel in this, the way you started and ended this poem. I hope to read more of you poems soon! and Please excause me if my suggestions sound rude.

    Jenn