by vero
Omg i love this poem. i like dark poems so this is one of my faviortes. I love the way u write how u relized it was a bad idea and anyone who reads this shoud acknowlage that. ok best of luck to u. |
by Laura
Wow! great poem..loved it keep it up Xox Laura Marie |
by crystal
Coo i know how u feel |
by *Emmy*
Dammn |
by Kristen
I feel that way too i miss my true love...:( |
by Pure Silence
This reminds me of my first stage of poetry. it's actually spooky =) I know this is an older poem but I think you could benift from taking this poem and revamping it. I'm not implying its bad but it could be better if you split it into stanza's, it would help the flow, and it would be more eye pleasing to the reader. |