Hey,
wow.. i loved it. but I have one suggestion. Instead of placing it in a paragraphg form.. make it into stanza's. it would be easier to read. Well, overal the poem was good though, and how u ended it was great,
Monique

Damn, thats some good ish, it was good from tha first few lines, and then you kept me guessin and ish and the ending was perfect.

Damn gurl you got some talent yourself. you keep writin like this and you could really get somewhere. i liked the story line that went along with the poem i often feel like doin the same thing to certain people that hurt me in my life, i think this will make me think twice about it though hahaha. good job.

Wow. this is amazing. so much drama. i love it

Amazing. Such great talent.

Very good,I like it alot.Keep it up!

Amazing by far the best poem i have read on this site u is goin on me favs :):)

Well, I didn't like the format at all for a poem. But the rest was excellent. You're very good with your emotions in some poems. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha