by LadyPearl Mar 18, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Bound to every limb by shackles of fear |
by Erika
Yet i love ur poem i think you schould go into this profesinoly |
Interesting...but i like it |
by Jordan
Wow, this sounds like some sort of twisted fairy tale rhyme. You did a great job with the rhyming and once again, you didn't fail to create a swarm wonderful images in my head. I can't tell you enough how excellent you are at using the english language to weave together some of the most breathtaking poems I have ever read.... |
Wow u haave a gr8 vocabulary! again excellent work, nice details again. 5/5 |
by PS
Hey i love this poem. its so beautiful and strong. the way you use certain words are amazing. and it flows fantastically. i love it |