Comments : You take, No more

  • 18 years ago

    by Azure :)

    Thats a really powerful poem and means alot to me, thank you. i feel like you know me, (sorry). i just wana say that your right and what you said in that poem is true if we stand together we are stronger and you have made me stronger as a person thank you so much. your really sweet, i hope everything is going ok for you. you have given me so much more confidence and will power i don't know how to thank you. am sorry if i sound daft but you have. if there is anything and i mean anything i can do just ask or say. your a really angle and a true star. God bless you :) * xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Beautiful

    Honestly, i thought u were talking about the devil! like, how he does try and manipulate us and hate ourselves and everything. i'm not sure who you were talking about, but it was so AWESOME! excellent job..you should get yourself published!
    always*Monique

  • 18 years ago

    by BeeBeeGun

    Thanks for the comment
    i liked this poem excellent job well written too :)
    its nice to see u writing for everyone and not just urself
    keep it up :)