by ~TornBecauseOfYou~ Mar 18, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You see he wasn't ready |
5/5, by the way |
Omg, i love this one |
Aww vrry strong yet romantic.. |
by lindsay
That was reeeeally good. great job! i think there's a word missing in stanza 5 tho. other than that, awesome job. 5/5 |
This was very good...and thanks for reading/rating/commenting on my poem! this was very good, very sweet...if u have and xanga, add me LostInYourDream420 or u can email me |