This was very good...and thanks for reading/rating/commenting on my poem! this was very good, very sweet...if u have and xanga, add me LostInYourDream420 or u can email me

That was reeeeally good. great job! i think there's a word missing in stanza 5 tho. other than that, awesome job. 5/5

Aww vrry strong yet romantic..

always lissa

Omg, i love this one
really deep, i know that feeling
keep it up, u rock!

love
tina
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5/5, by the way